Saturday, October 10, 2009

I and She

She used to come late
I tried hard to be awake
I tried harder
I slept sooner
I woke up
She used to sleep
I wanted to talk
I wanted to hug
I went off
I came back
She came early today
I pretended to sleep
She wanted to talk
But I still slept
She wanted to hug
I continued sleeping
She went off
She used to come late
I used to sleep
She is far now
I can't try hard to be awake
I tried to sleep
and never I got.
Inspired by a scene of 'Saving Private Ryan'

2 comments:

  1. She'll come back , when u are awake or even if in dreams.
    She'll try her best to get u a nice sleep
    She'll try er best to lend u good days
    She'll come back and hug you once again
    For she was never gone, She was with you
    All the time, she also missed you

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  2. very touching, can't say which one was better urs or abhilasha's remark :)

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