I climbed a mountainthe mountain had hard rocks, deep troughs
A trough was waiting for me to fall
I struggled a lot
But in midst there came a storm which held me back
I stood there silent and still
I cried and the mountain too
When I decided to go back
a hand came and asked me to push myself
I gave my hand in his hand
He held my hand tight and together we climbed
We fell but that hand lock wasn't broken
We got on the top and the view was very beautiful
And that hand was still there to hold me
To prevent me from falling
It gave me an assurance not to worry
I slept in his arms and thanked God for that lovely view and him in my life
a poem which touches the heart of every person.....a poem which can't be forgotten by ne one.....n it's gist trying to signify the feel of that warmth which everyone dreams must come true in his/her life
ReplyDeleteA true display of love and a pleasant interpretation of your heart!! Ms. Jayantika urf the queen poetess trust me, u cudnt be better! Its so lovely dear, so sweet and so much peaceful. Hats off to u!!! :)
ReplyDeleteA nice version straight from someone's heart.. A different thought and topic.. Hope your mountain stays there for ever :)
ReplyDeleteBtw, Who is the 'Mr. Everest'? ;)
kaafi dino baad i ve read ur poem..........couldnt really make out wether it was from mind or.........But is this HIM a real person 4 whom u have real feelings.njoy.tc
ReplyDeleteA good one..[;)]
ReplyDeleteA very nice n very beautifully u have written ur thoughts...really very much heart-touching......!
ReplyDeletefab... outstanding.. hats off
ReplyDeletesheer truth in direct words
ms poetess...every day u get better and better.
after 4 yrs u'll be a poet or engineer ??? :P
fabulous (without assurance)
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